Jewel Emerald Alvarez

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Character Name: Jewel Emerald Alvarez
Nickname(s): Jewel, Em, Emerald
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Grade: Senior
Former School: Hillard
Sexuality: Straight
Clique: Prep
Weight: 130 pounds
Height: 5'7
Appearence:

Personality:

Jewel compared to the other cheerleaders are nicer. She is also friendly to almost everyone. She's very humble and a nature-lover too. She can also be a stubborn girl. She get angry easily. She doesn't want to wait to people.

Most of the time, Jewel spends her time with the classics, exchange students and the jocks than the other cheerleaders. She doesn't know why but she's much more comfortable to be with them. She loves to have fun and party so she's pretty much sociable. She's also very much honest. She doesn't want to lie and make lies. When she know someone is lying, she confront them.

She tends to draw how she feels right then, or what is on her mind right then. She also loves to play the piano. Another way is the kind of music she listens to. If one pays attention to those, then they will be alright with her. Jewel also has a artist side to her. She loves to draw and paint. She can almost make a painting out of anything too. If someone doesn't see her painting anywhere, they can find her where there is a piano.

History:

Jewel Rivera was born on May 28 in Spain. She has two parents named Matthew and Carol Alvarez. When she was four, her parents had a disagreement. Which ended up with her parents getting a divorce. Jewel's mother, Carol, then took her daughter and went to live to the United States, to start a new life there. Jewel was an honor student in her schools even though she's a cheerleader most all her life. When she was eight years old, Jewel took a interest in art and music, while at the same time, Carol found a soul mate for herself. Her mother met an American gentlemen named Ethan Roger. After a few years Carol married Ethan. Jewel was uneasy about it, but she only wanted to see her mother happy. That was when her mother, decided it was time, Jewel started spending time with her father Matthew.

This wasn't easy for Jewel at first. But she eventually got used to it. And she would spent half her time with her father in Spain, and other half in California, US with her mother and step-father. During the summers she would spend with her father, while during the normal school terms, she would be with her mother. It took a while to get used to going back and forth between her parents.

As she was coming around to being a teenager. She had discovered a new world one day by making a new friend. At school, Jewel was introduced to a girl named Sheryl. Sheryl became friends with Jewel, and Jewel learned a few new things. Slowly Jewel started to come out of her quiet shell, and started to have a adventurous side to her. Soon Jewel was hanging out with Sheryl and her friends everyday. Which ended up leading Jewel into trouble. Sheryl was the reason why Jewel became friendly ad nice to everyone. She will never forget her even though she's in France now.

Sample Rp:

It was 10:00 pm. Jewel was still laying down in the couch. Her mom was already sleeping. She can't sleep. She was so excited for tomorrow. She's going to go to Hogwarts. She wondered what it would look like. Her grandmom told her that it's amazing and beautiful. There are a lot of staircases too. She still can't believe that this is happening to her. It's been how many weeks that she knew that she's a witch but it still didn't sink in to her completely. So now instead of sleeping in her room for tomorrow, she is watching television and reading at the same time in their living room. She's going to miss her parents and this world. She wondered how it feels with no electricity, television, computer, airplanes and a lot more. They said that they oly have many floating candles in the air. After 30 minutes of thinking, Jewel finally fall asleep but in the couch.

"I'm going to miss you Jewel"her mom told her teary-eyed. She was now in the platform to ride the train. There are a lot of people moving around and shouting. "I'm going to miss you too"she told her smiling sadly. Her dad was her today and her step-dad too. They are both in work right now but she saw them yesterday. It's not that they're work is important than her but she just told them that it's okay. "Jewel you really need to go. Don't forget to write a letter to me okay?"her mom asked her. "Sure mom. I'm going to write to all of you all the time. See you in the summer"she said. She hugged her mom tightly ad Jewel was now walking toward the train. She turned around for a moment and waved seeing her mom crying.

After how many hours in the train, they finally arrived at Hogwarts. She saw the big castle and she was amazed how pretty it was. Her grandmom was right. The castle was so beautiful. She was now imagining living her. They entered the Great Hall as what the professor called it. There are already a lot of students staring at them. She was feeling shy right now. They stopped in the center and the professor started calling their names. Finally Jewel's name was called. She walked slowly feeling nervous. She wondered what house she's going to be in. She remembered her grandmom told her they're are four houses. She hoped she's not in Slytherin. She's okay with everything but not Slytherin. Her grandma told her people they're are arrogant and mean. She sat down on the chair waiting for the sorting hat to talked. "HUFFLEPUFF"the sorting hat said loudly. She sighed and stood up. She was happy that she's not in Slytherin and walked toward Hufflepuff's table.

Celeb:

Demi Lovato

Out Of Character:

Maureen, 14, about a year and through pm please, Weightless, Most HP sites, etc..

[( shannon )]

Before I can accept this, I need you to go through and re-read. There were quite a few grammar mistakes throughout like "Jewel never broken a bone in her whole life." should be "Jewel has never broken a bone in her whole life." It was mostly helping verbs that were needed. Looking past that, the story line was good and I enjoyed reading this.

[( shannon )]

There are still a lot of grammar mistakes, even after you edited it. "She don't like dark clothes." should be "She doesn't like dark clothes." "Usually, Jewel have a brown hair." should be "Usually Jewel has brown hair." There were a lot more after that. I like your writing, so I'm offering another chance if you want to take it, but the grammar needs to be fixed. If things aren't improved after this, I will unfortunately have to reject this.

[( shannon )]

I'm really sorry, I have to reject this. You're such a sweet person and it really kills me to do this because I would love to have you as a member, but there are just too many grammar mistakes, and even if they were corrected, that won't guarantee that your posts will be okay. I'm sorry.