Anastasia Jones

[coffanilla]

Character Name: Anastasia Jones
Nickname(s): Annie
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Grade: Senior
Former School: Transfer
Sexuality: Straight
Clique: Exchange Student
Weight: 119
Height: 5'4
Appearence:

She has an average body and very tan from living in Australia for a year and a half. She has beautiful, greenish gray eyes that sparkle when the light hits them right. She has a pretty smile too. She mostly wears puffy skirts and corsets, colors she mostly wear are black and purple. She has snake bites and one tattoo.

She has a very pretty body and her cup size is C38. Her eyes are warming along with her smile when she is friendly to you. She wears black eyeliner and she has so many lashes she doesn't need to wear mascara. But she wears it anyway. She looks pretty in anything she wears

Personality:

She used to be full of life and so happy and sweet before her mother died. After her mother died she developed this tough exterior so she wouldn't be bothered with because her mother died when she was told she would be by her side forever. It was her mother's fault to die because her mother had the disease alcoholism and smoked. But she was still friendly and kind to her friends but mean to anyone who didn't know her at all.

She develops friends easily if she lets her nicer side show. Around the boys she think are cute and hot she's a little bit nicer to them instead of the girls. She's extremely mean to the bitches in the school because she's hated them ever since middle school. She's quiet usually the first day. She'll get upset when you talk trash about her mom even though she kinda hated her mom.

She'll be your worst nightmare if you get on her bad side. She isn't afraid of trouble. She can scare others easily because she was born to do so. If you hurt her in anyway she'll give you the look of death.

History:

Anastasia was born with her twin brother Alex into a rich family. Her mother was a fashion Designer while her father an archeologist. Anastasia learned how to excavate and record and date artifacts from her father. She learned how to design clothes from her mother at a young age. Her mother was an alcoholic when Anastasia turned ten which her mother was 40.

Her life was never the same after that. Her mother began to smoke too and her parents always fought until her mother died in a car accident at the age of 43. After Anastasia just finished middle school and it was tragic. Anastasia decided to live in London for a year and a half with some family members she barely saw. Her years in London were great even though she had the tough exterior.

She developed the accent beginning of sophomore year. When she decided to leave in the middle of sophomore year she decided to go to Australia to live with some of her dad's family. She got her first boyfriend and first kiss in Australia. The beginning of junior year she developed the Australian accent,(she can still do the English accent). When she was done with sophomore year she decided to go back home to finish high school in her hometown.

Sample Rp:

Anastasia woke up to the sound of her alarm. It was 5:33 in the morning. She got up and ate a bowl of cereal. She got dressed in her purple corset, puffy black miniskirt, black fishnets and black goth boots. She grabbed her bag and got into her purple corvette and drove to school.

Annie stepped out of her purple corvette and looked around the place she dreamed of going to while in middle school. A tear rolled down her cheek, too many bad experiences in middle school. She wiped the tear away and grabbed her bag and walked toward the school. She'd been wondering if this year, her final year would be different from her other ones in London and Australia.

She went into the building and saw that no one was there. She looked at her papers and went to find her locker. After walking down a couple of halls she found it. She opened it to find it was empty. She put her notebooks and bag in it and wandered the school.

Celeb:

Natalie Horler

Out Of Character:

My name is Emily Lamarre i'm 16 and this is my first year of rp, you can email me at [e-mail]

[( shannon )]

Hello (: So, there were quite a few things needed to be fixed here.

1) I need at least another paragraph for appearance and a couple more sentences on the personality.

2) Within the first few lines there were grammar errors. "She has an average body and very tan from living in Australia for a year and a half." You left out an "is" after the "and". This "She mostly wears puffy skirts and corsets, colors she mostly wear are black and purple." should read "She mostly wears puffy skirts and corsets. The colors she usually wears are black and purple." It needed to be two sentences. There were more throughout.

I'm not going to say you won't get accepted, but there are a lot of experienced posters on this site with many years of roleplaying. If you think you can keep up, please edit and PM me once you are ready for me to look it over again. (: I don't want to sound like a bitch, I'm just trying to be honest with you.