Sky Jade Smith

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Character Name: Skyler Jade Smith
Nickname(s): Sky or SJ
Gender: Female
Age: Seventeen
Grade: Senior
Former School: Hillard
Sexuality: Straight
Clique: Prep
Weight: 110
Height: 5'9
Appearence:

Sky has a soft face, smooth as a baby. Her eyes are as blue as the ocean, but they can also be very intimidate you, her lips are full and pink, Sky's nose is perfect in her eyes. She has the blonde hair that falls right below her sholders and along her cheast.

Sky is skinny but is built with muscle, she has curves in the spots their supposed to be, no extra fat on her body what so ever. Sky's skin is sun kissed, not to dark but not to light, just perfect.

Sky has great fashion, most of her clothes are either swim suits, Miss Me jeans, or athletic shorts. Sky will always look her best unless she is going to go work out. She dresses to impress not scare people away.

Personality:

Fierce && Fabulous
Sky is fierce she has done competitive cheer for 9 years, shes super competitive and will push her self to the limt, and will do whatever it takes to win. Sky always dresses fabulous and has her hair done right, she never leaves the house without make up on.

Smart && Carefree
Sky has always been book smart she would never let her grades slip even for one second, she always had to study so she could participate in the activities she was allowed to do. Sky is carefree and worry free, she knows she wont let her self slip up. Sky always puts her friends first, she's trustworthy and an amazing friend, she's outgoing and fun to be around.

Party, Party, Party, with a little flirt.
Sky is a party animal and isn't afraid of going after what she wants, she's a big flirt with out even knowing it...It gets her into trouble sometimes...

History:

On May 5, a Baby girl was in the arms of her Mother Andrea Smith with a loving father Nick Smith, Sky was born into the world, She had an Older sister Becca, and an over protective brother Spencer.

Sky lived in Miami till she was seven and her dad got a job offer in sunny California. Ever since the move Sky got what ever she wanted, they left everything back in Miami especially all of her freinds at TOP GUN, and her best friend Danielle Power, Sky's life hasn't been the same without them. But like her dearest father says life moves on and so should you.

Once Sky got into High School everything changed she made new friends and became a party animal it was so different from all the rules she had in Flordia.

Sky and Spencer were closer than ever the only problem he didn't like was that Sky always hooked up with his friends.

Now Sky is a Senior and is going to live life to the fullest she can before she goes off to college...

Sample Rp:

Sky's alarm was going off, is it really time, she thought. Sky slowly rolled out of bed and walked to the closet where she picked out a nice Ed Hardy bathing suit and put it on. Then headed over to the bathroom to fix her curls and put on some mascara.

Once she had primped her self up to her standards she walked down the spiral stair case to the kitchen to find her sister Becca sitting at the island on her MacBook searching college offers, "What are you looking at twerp." Becca said as she glanced up from her studies to find her younger sister eyeing her. "Just wondering what your doing." Sky said in her bitchest tone back to her sister. But before Becca could reply Sky grabbed her keys, protein bar, and her ipod, and was headed out to her Jaguar.

When Sky wakes up she always heads down to the beach for a run. It was just something she did, it kept her mind off of family issues and a way to keep her body in shape while also getting a tan. Once Sky pulled up to the beach she put her headphones in and locked up the car and started sprinting into the sunrise. Sky could always clear her mind when she ran, it was like an escape betwwen reality and fantasy, but if there was another male runner she would always race him, it was in her nature to be the best. Sky could never get over the fact of the two beaches, between sunny California and sunny Flordia the beaches are complete opposites, just like her life has now become.

Celeb:

Ashley Benson

Out Of Character:

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[( shannon )]

Unfortunately, Allie, I cannot accept this. I would suggest possibly reapplying. These are the reasons for rejection:

1) Length- Everything was just too short. We have a minimum word count of 400 words per post and judging by every section of this application, you are not prepared to meet that length every post. I believe you have the potential to, however.

2) Grammar- Simple mistakes were made throughout this application such as "their" instead of "they're". These are simple things that can be corrected by just rereading.

3) Run On Sentences- This was the biggest problem with the application. A full sentence contains a noun and a verb. Some of these sentences were actually sentence fragments. Some sentences needed commas. Other sentences needed the commas removed. Rereading would also help solve this problem.

I'm really sorry I cannot accept this and I would suggest looking over my advice and reapplying!