Amanda Thomas

[amandathomas]

Character Name: Amanda Leigh Thomas
Nickname(s): Annie Anna
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Grade: Sophomore
Former School: Transfer
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clique: Scenester
Weight: 132
Height: 5'2
Appearence:

Amanda has long blond hair. Her style changes often between curly and straight. She likes to put temp colors in her hair as well. She has high, thin, black eye brows that are usually behind her side bangs. She has big brown eyes with long black lashes. She wears lots of makeup on her eyes such as, black eyeliner, eye shadow, mascara, and sometimes sticks on jewels. Her cheek bones are high giving her a unique look. She has a cute, short, button nose with her septum pierced. Her mouth is smaller then most and has her minro pierces as well as snake bites and her tongue.
Anna’s body is small as well. She reaches most peoples shoulders, and could be picked up by ten year olds. Most the time she mistaken for a younger child. When she goes to fairs most the time she can’t ride the big rides. Despite her small body she has all the right curves in all the right places. She’s not lacking anywhere. Her hair reaches her mid back so she usually pulls it over her shoulders.
Her clothing varies with her mood. She likes to wear shorts and baggie tees. Or on a sunny shopping day she would wear a dress, even if its way to dressy for a trip to the mall. She likes skirts too but she does not really wear them much. Her favorite thing to wear is skinny jeans, a tight top, and heels. She will always have accessories such as rings, bows, body jewels, and anything else that would make her pretty in her eyes.

Personality:

Anna is one of the girls that can be the sweetest girl anyone has ever known. She likes to make others happy. She can’t stand to see others upset or in a bad spot. She likes to make people laugh even if she doesn’t feel like laughing herself. She puts on her happy face around others but inside she feels lost and depressed.
Anna has a fear of being abandoned. Therefore she plays and laughs with other people yet holds them at arms lengths so they cant get to her heart. She really does want someone to love her, and she wants to love some one all the same. She wants someone that needs her, a place to belong.
Despite her happy personality Anna is very shy with people she has never met. She would rather the other to supply the conversation and she knows all about them before they become friends. If she’s with people she don’t know and there’s a crowd, she gets nervous. But once she gets to know everyone, she a happy party girl!

History:

Amanda Thomas was born to a rich family in England. She had a twin that never lived after birth. As a little girl she thought she was a princess. Her dad spoiled her against her mother’s whishes. She got everything she ever wanted and didn’t have to ask twice. She loved her father very much as a small girl. Her mother on the other hand never spent time with her. She never really wanted any thing to do with the child.
When Anna got turned ten, old enough to be a Big Girl her father started to leave her home with the nanny, or the maids. As time when on her father became a workaholic and paid no attention to Anna. Desperate for attention Anna started to act up, braking things that were in the house or yelling at the maids. She continued to do so until she was old enough to do what she really wanted to do.
When Anna turned fourteen, she started to rebel against her family. She would leave her home in the night and go missing for days. She would come back with green, black, orange, Ect. hair. She would cut it off when ever she pleased. She did what ever she pleased; nothing got her the attention she craved.
When Anna finally realized that her family was no long what she thought it was she became withdrawn. She wouldn’t eat, talk, or even get out of bed in the morning. When Anna got terribly sick it raised questions on how she was being taken care of. This enraged her mother. Her mother came to her along with her father one night. She was blamed for the murder of her twin, told she was good for nothing and didn’t belong in the family.
So now Anna was given a choice. “Pick some where, anywhere in the world. You can live there, on your own. You’ll always have money, but you won’t have us.” It was the last thing her father said to her. She was heading for California on the next plane. Now that she’s here, with everything she wants. She can start anew and with luck, find someone to love her.

Sample Rp:

The air was dry and cold as Kyliee looked around in confusion. She didn’t know where she was. A forest? Yes. There were no buildings around, only trees. She listened hard thinking maybe she could hear some cars driving by on the slick roads, but she heard nothing. Dead silence. Pulling her arms around her mid section she took a cautions step forward to explore her surroundings. “H-hello?” He called out and watched her breath rise in a white cloud. “My dear” a deep rich male voice answered back. Eyes big a round she turned to run but didn’t get far. “Going somewhere?” He asked. “Who are you!?” she whispered as she took baby steps back. “Oh dear girl. You know who I am.” A wicked smile stretched across his face then her lunged for her.
Kyliee jolted awake with an ear splitting scream. Her screams didn’t die till Nathans arms were around her, rocking her back and forth on the small twin size bed. “Just a dream. just a dream.” He repeated against her hair. She didn’t know how long he let her cry on his shoulder but when the chest shaking sobs faded away she was tired and her arm hurt. She pulled back to look at Nathan but didn’t drop the front of his dull gray shirt which was held tightly in her fist. “Was it him again?” He asked cautiously. She shook her head yes. Since her accident with her ex-sire, Cyrus, she had been having nerve wrecking dreams of him coming back to finish her off.
After some time of sitting on the bed she stood and took a step away from him, “Thank you.” She whispered hoarsely. “I didn’t mean to wake you.” She gave a sheepish smile and walked out, only to be followed by his heavy foot steps. “Kyliee.” She didn’t listen. She couldn’t let him comfort her, no. She loved him and everyone knew it, But he wont love her back. The thought brought another tear to her eye. Quickly she blocked her emotions off from the blood tie. She couldn’t have him avoiding her again. It was to painful.
When she reached the refrigerator she opened it and pulled out the bag of blood only to have Nathan snatch it from her before she could heat it. “Talk to me Kyliee. This scares the shit out of me when you wont talk to me.” His voice was sad, pleading. She risked a look at him and it was a mistake. His eyes, so sad, was killing her even more. “Im sorry. It was just another nightmare. Im fine.” She spoke in a low and quiet voice as she fidgeted with the hem of the long shirt. “Can I have that back?” She asked. “I’ll make it. Sit.” She did as told. “What happened this time?”He asked conversationally. “It’s the one in the woods.” That’s all she had to say. She wouldn’t tell him no more. He knew it all. “Im sorry.” He half whispered. “Im sorry?” She shook her head in disbelief. He was always sorry, it wasn’t his fault. “I change my mind. Im going back to bed. Thanks.”
She got up quickly and jogged to her room. She herd him call her name but ignored it. As she curled up under the blanket she herd the sound of pots and pans hitting the floor and muffled curses. A tear slid from her eye and into her hair at her temple. “Im sorry” She whispered be for she slid into the darkness of sleep.

Celeb:

Hannie Dropkick

Out Of Character:

Kyliee Rose Lynnett
16
3 1/2
Text, Windows live
My own, Robins Dale Academy (Currently under construction)
My own, Sky Line (Being made)
Vlad High
Worrior Cats
Caution 2.0
R&R
Rough Life
The wolf in you.
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some others,
I dont use them.

[aangel]

there's a lot of contrast with amanda's profile, it seems. mostly her personality. she has a lot of opposites going on, which for someone in the real world, would be really hard to channel into. if you could make her seem a little more realistic, or at least go into more depth into explaining each other opposite traits, i think it would help a lot for anyone wanting to get to know amanda without role playing with her.

also, there's not much detail in her appearance. if you could add a little, maybe go into more about her body, facial appearance, etc., that'd be really great.

there's also some spelling and grammar errors. if you could reread, and fix those up, you'll be all set.

[( shannon )]

I wasn't the first one to read this, so if you have not modified completely yet, I did not know that. Everything, however, still needs to be lengthened. The rp sample was a good length, put the personality was mostly the section that came up a bit short.