Destiny Marie Mendoza

[destiny]

Character Name: Destiny Marie Mendoza
Nickname(s): Fuse or Drop
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Grade: Junior
Former School: Hillard
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clique: Gangster
Weight: 127 lbs.
Height: 5' 3
Appearence:

Destiny has soft toned skin, long, wavy, soft as silk, black hair, and deep dark brown eyes. Her face is really pretty with her hair and eyes. Her body is really fit and really curvy, basically meaning she has really nice sized boobs and a good sized ass. But her body still has a bit of baby fat here and there. Destiny’s favorite color is red so she’ll dress in all red.

Her shirts are all loose and baggy. She has an extra large, baggy blood red, shirt and red pants. Her red converse shoes and red bandanna is stuck out of her right pocket or sometimes hanging around her neck. This is just one of Destiny’s clothing. Her next favorite pair of clothes is a small red shirt, with blue skinny jeans and a red LA hat, with her red jacket, that is her more formal piece clothing.

Her last bit of clothing is a sleeveless shirt that exposes her belly, a red LA had that is tilted to the side, her red bandanna is sticking out of her right back pocket, her red jacket is half way zipped up, and her black skinny jeans are tight around her butt area. This is what she calls her sexy outfit; she mostly wears this to parties or when she is trying to get a date. Destiny sleeps in her red boxers that are made of silk and a black sleeveless undershirt.

But no matter how many outfits she wears she always has black and white converse shoes on.

Personality:

Destiny isn’t like any girl you ever met. She is really rude, stubborn, hardheaded. Destiny IS rude and really crude. Yes she’ll say please and thank you, but that is all for her manners. Destiny will belch in front of people and not give a crud who she does it in front of. She’ll put her elbows on the table and scratches were it itches, in front of people. This makes her a strong tomboy, which she is. She also will play around with the guys and like a guy. Meaning, her humor is really rude and or crude and she loves to fight and or wrestle.

Destiny is also really hardheaded and stubborn. Destiny can’t really be talked out of anything, by almost anyone. If she sets her mind on something, she’ll do it, and most likely, you can’t really do anything to stop her. Only Destiny’s closet friends can talk her out of stuff. Why she is like that, no one knows. Destiny loves to fight and is a great fighter when it comes to matches. She just loves to see people in pain when she is fighting. Destiny also just loves to eat, eat, eat. She’ll eat anything and everything. But her incredible metabolism and with her always working out, she is almost always thin. She doesn’t like veggies all that much, but that doesn’t mean that she won’t eat them.

The last parts of her personality are that Destiny has a really bad temper. She’ll get mad over the most stupid things, like if someone calls her one small name, she’ll blow up, big time. She’ll fight anything and everything that gets in her way of kicking someone’s ass. Destiny might not kill the person, but she will try to kick their ass. She is also a sex and drug addict she just loves them both and we’ll leave it like that.

History:

Her family wasn’t really from Los Angelus, California. No, they were really from Mexico. They hated it there and wanted to move, so they did. Her family had been planning this entire trip for years, studying English and such, but still teaching Elizabeth Spanish, making her good with both languishes. In her neighborhood there were a lot of gangs, mainly the Bloods and the Crips. Her mother got into the Crips at the age of nine and kept on banging ever sense. Her probation officer then made her finally go to high school, shortly after she got out of boot camp for a robbery.

She then met Jose Mendoza. They started dating for over a year then they had their first kid Rey Mendoza. He was a fighter ever sense he was born, got into the game at the age of eight, the same time when they had their second child Destiny, the same time Elizabeth and Jose both were out of high school.

Destiny was only six when she got into her first fight, not even knowing how to do so. She lost her first fight and went crying home to mom, dad, and Rey. Rey then beat the living crap out of her for losing, then he took he out to the backyard and started to teach he how to fight, and told her every time she was to loose she would get beaten up, and to practice how to fight everyday.

Destiny was sad and a bit scared about this. She didn’t ever want to get hurt by her loving older brother Rey. She just kept her mouth shut and did as Rey said and kept on practicing. Her parents didn’t stop Rey at all as for they wanted Destiny to know how to defend herself. She then got better and better, winning just about every fight.

She then got into the Bloods at the age of eight, just like her brother. Then she met two people, Lee Jackson, and Robert Lopez. They all promised to be best friends for life. They would do everything together, smoke, fight, jump people, steal, and sometimes even do a threesome. One day she got into a huge gang battle against there top rivals, The Crips. Lee was killed in that battle, shot in the head. Destiny got a bit depressed about the whole thing. Her mind kept on getting more and more corrupted. She then started to date Robert.

Robert wasn’t the same whenever Lee died. He did date her, but he was abusive in every way. He would threaten her, hit her, cheat on her, sexually abuse her, and emotionally abuse her. She then got into her last fight with him, and it was the biggest fist fight you ever seen in-between a guy and a girl, but she came out the winner.

She then put him in jail for a while. She kept on living a lonely life with all of her friends gone. Robert killed himself in juvenile. She has been trying to get rid all of the pain in a lot of ways. She soon started to grow, but her over all attitude didn’t really change. She then finally moved to a new city in Cali, but now she is going to have to go back to the top. I wonder what is in store for her next.

Sample Rp:

Destiny through another meatless chicken wing into the large pile of exactly twenty-five spicy chicken wings with the meat stripped from the bone! Destiny was an eating machine at this point only fifteen more wings to go! She had to finish exactly forty wings without throwing up, passing out, or stopping. But that was fine with Destiny she hasn’t eaten anything all day and boy was she hungry.

Destiny looks like most Mexicans. She has soft toned skin, long, wavy, soft as silk, black hair, and deep dark brown eyes. Her face is really pretty with her hair and eyes. Her body is really fit and really curvy, basically meaning she has really nice sized boobs and a good sized ass. But her body still has a bit of baby fat here and there, because her pregnancy ended.

She was dressed a bit different today. She had a dirty, baggy, white tee and a bit baggy blue jeans on. But she still had her red Jordan on with black laces. Destiny was the only the second person in the contest with a big fat guy named Joe who wasn’t anywhere near to where Destiny was.

Destiny had only one chicken wing left, and she finished it off within seconds! And she was now the winner! The judge came over and raised up Destiny’s arm!

“Woot!” destiny hollered. The crowd cheered and laughed that Destiny, a Mexican girl had won an eating contest. Destiny couldn’t believe it herself; she had won her first eating contest! She was completely in love with the food, she wanted a bit more. It wasn’t Destiny’s fault she could eat so much, it was her metabolism to blame, and it was just so fast. Destiny walked off of the stage and then she felt a gurgle in her belly, making her let out ha huge, smelly belch.

Destiny then saw a girl walk up to her. The first thing that came to her mind is this girl is a bit big, but Destiny wasn’t all to slim herself so, she had no room to talk. On the other hand, Destiny was a lot thinner then this girl. Destiny tried a half ass smile back and finally said,

“Thanks, and your right, the food was great.” Then she shake the girl’s hand in the gang banger style, sliding her palm across hers and then grasping her fingers.

“I’m Destiny Marie Mendoza.” Destiny said turning her face straight.

Celeb:

Victoria Justice

Out Of Character:

Name: Just Call me Destiny or Ash.

Age: 16

Years of RP Experience: No years only about seven months.

Contact: [e-mail]

[( shannon )]

There's just a few things that need to be addressed before I can accept this.

1) Any smilie faces such as XD or ^^ are not acceptable in applications. This is more of a formal application, so the use of smilies to express feelings should really be done through words.
2) I would definitely re-read through the application and check for simple mistakes such as the use of "is" instead of "are". As well as errors such as using "read" instead of "red". These could all be fixed with a quick look over. Also, in the history there are quite a few mistakes with "he" and "her".
3) Unfortunately, we are not accepting any former children into the site right now. We have an overload of characters who already have kids and it's just not realistic to have another teenage pregnancy (past or present) on the site.
4) The history needs to be tweaked a little bit too in other aspects. "Destiny was only six when she got into her first fight, not even knowing how to do so. She lost her first fight and went crying home to mom, dad, and Rey. Rey then beat the living crap out of her for losing, then he took he out to the backyard and started to teach he how to fight, and told her every time she was to loose she would get beaten up, and to practice how to fight everyday." This part seems a little unrealistic. I think that this would bring out a lot more emotions in the girl if her dad were to have beat her at a young age. This wouldn't just be an area to ignore so much.
5) Lastly, the sample rp is a little short. All posts on Central must be a minimum of 400 words as stated in the rules. Like I say to everyone, if you feel like you cannot handle this, maybe this isn't the site for you. We are more of an intermediate/advanced site with people reaching up to 1000 words per post, so if you feel like you can reach the limit every single post, feel free to edit the application.

[( shannon )]

I apologize Destiny, but this application isn't really fit for Central yet. Many improvements have been made, but the phrasing of some sentences is just off. For instance "Her red converse shoes and red bandanna is stuck out of her right pocket or sometimes hanging around her neck" is incorrect because the conjunction is used incorrectly. The way it is written states that the red converse also stick out of her right pocket or hang around her neck. "This is just one of Destiny’s clothing" is also incorrect. It should be "This is just one of Destiny's clothing choices." Some things needed the addition or the subtraction of words to make them correct. Then, at the end, "But no matter how many outfits she wears she always has black and white converse shoes on" contradicted your previous statement about the red converse. This was just in the appearance. There were more mistakes throughout the application that cannot be fixed with our help and would require further assistance that we cannot provide here at Central. I really do apologize. You have a lot of great potential to write even better with a bit more practice! I would suggest possibly reapplying in the future. Thank you.