Andrew Jilts

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Character Name: Andrew Jilts
Nickname(s): Drew
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Grade: Sophomore
Sexuality: Straight
Clique: Emo
Weight: 139
Height: 5'9
Appearence:

Andrew is 5'9 and have nice brown hair he has a piercing on his lips he weighs 139. He has nice blues eyes. he is attractive to some girls in some kind of way, he also have a tattoo.

Personality:

Andrew is a complicated kid, the side he shows however is not. Around most people he's quiet , and quick tempered attitude that is the root of most of his troubles in life. Andrew most times comes off as someone who doesn't care, not liking to be in places with a lot of people. Andrew has a pretty good sense of humor, finding practical jokes to be his fancy. When it comes to women he is sort of awkward and doesn’t have a lot of experience with the opposite sex. His values are complicated, he always respects women and always tries to chow respect to elders.
Some of his interests in life are reading, Pictures, and history. His dislikes are annoying people and anybody that’s entitled to more than they deserve. If you got to know Andrew you would know that if you were ever in need of help he would be there, if you ever needed someone to talk to he would listen but not to expect anything in the way of academics or financially.

History:

Andrew was the 4th child of Xaixer and Riley Jilts. He was born on June 17 1994 in west Virginia and arrived later then his expected birth day. He is the only child that was born between Xaixer and Riley his other siblings were between Xaixer and his wife. Ever since andrew was little he was picked on by his siblings and ignored by his parents and because of these Andrew had to grow a backbone early in life and stand up for himself .

His father Xaixer always hated Andrew and they always argued with each other. His mother riley always sided with his father making andrew despise both parents. Trying to avoid spending time at home. Andrew became a boy who was quiet. In small amounts Andrew started wishing his father was dead.

Andrew came from abusive an father, and he has deliberately forgotten them because he hates his guts. He used to live in west Virginia, with his mom and his father. He never liked him, it was always a hateful relationship with him and his father.

When he entered his early teens, he began to not really care too, much about his life,He always sat in his room thinking about how much he hates his father , and how he wish is life was better.

When he was about fifteen, he got fed up with his and dad consistently saying offensive words, and gathered up as much money as he could and moved with his aunt in California.

He eventually became somewhat happier about his life moving away from his father forever, and not having to see to hear the things he says, His aunt has a nice house , and good money, and eventually he enrolled himself in Cali, and became very attached to music, but he is a strong believer Living with his aunt who cares.

Sample Rp:

Andrew jilts

Celeb:

Alex Mckee

Out Of Character:

My name is camron im 15 i roleplayed for 2 years

[( shannon )]

So, I see that you have made two applications under two separate ooc names. We have IP addresses here, so although you used two separate email addresses, it is obvious that you are the same person. Aside from fixing that, for the "sample rp" section, we need to actually see a sample roleplay. You may only put your character's name if you are already a member of Central and have a current character.

Honestly, reading through this application, I can tell that the directions on the application were not read clearly and that there is a lack of effort put into it. Please revise both of your applications to meet the requirements and then I will look them both over. Thank you.

[elijah dean kennedy]

Sorry, we're gonna have to reject this and your other profile.
There were several issues with the application, length being a major problem and also grammar.
I think that there is definitely room for improvement, but this is not the site to start on.
Good luck in your future writing endeavors!